Tuesday, November 6, 2007

The outsiders: Part III: The "ugly" race

The darkness shall conquer the light
The Crypts shall spew demons from the Nether
The Blight shall be brought upon the thriving "life"
The Undead shall rule the foolish mortals

The eternal hiss will subdue the mortal hymns
The toxic matter will consume the ordinary
The dark lords will reign supreme
The strong will shall overcome all obstacles

The young warrior race is naught but our puppet
The chaos they spread unknowingly is naught but our plan
The rightfully theirs shall go back to the fire clan
The pretending races shall learn who are the true masters

The ignorant humans know not of our eons old history
The orcs know not that their will is controlled by us
The pointy ears are the ones who know
the purpose of the war we raged on them

The pretenders have existed for mere centuries
The true ones have been here forever
The pointy ears and the ignorant humans don't even know
That it's them who are the outsiders on this planet

The mortal human prince is on the dark side now
He is a puppet whom we control to fulfil the great ambition
Foolish mortal thought he was on a quest to find the stone of orunthal
But it was planted by us to control his mind, to kill his father, the ignorant "king"

The stage is set, for the Pointy ears and the Warrior clans are dying in clashes
The Orcs shall lead themselves to their doom at the dark island,
The planet will see its dark future soon, it knows not that it was but its past
The so called "outsiders" shall be welcomed by us, and the world shall be ours for the taking

10 Comments:

Blogger K said...

lol .. the good..the bad the ugly ...giving a mobster dimension to a fantasy novel ..thats innovative :D

November 6, 2007 at 10:36 PM  
Blogger expressions said...

baapre baapre...itni nafrat!!!kis se?[:D]...cool down [:P]

November 7, 2007 at 10:50 AM  
Blogger zoobean said...

ye ugly kaun hai????? good samajh mein aaya...bad samajh mein aaya...ugly nahi aaya.....

November 9, 2007 at 12:07 AM  
Blogger zoobean said...

wow...cat ko 2 hafte baaki aur dimaag mein orcs, elves, goblins..badhiya hai......

jab interviews honge to is blog ke printouts le jaana...these blogs and ur educational, work profile will impress anybody...seriously....

inpe comment nahi kar raha kyunki poetry main samajh nahi paata....

November 9, 2007 at 12:14 AM  
Blogger The Junkie said...

@zubin

As the poem suggests....the ugly race is the "Undead" race....as it shall be revealed later, they hold the most important part of the story

I am just trying to enter the point of views of all the races rather than providing a unidimensional world seen from a human eye

November 9, 2007 at 12:28 AM  
Blogger zoobean said...

waiting for ur blog on the human race

November 9, 2007 at 12:30 AM  
Blogger The Junkie said...

arrre....the first part was the human race :)

November 9, 2007 at 12:32 AM  
Blogger Chitra Nayak said...

comments baad mein..but clarifications pehle!!
first part was on HUMAN race?? i thot it was on elves.ouch!! gadbad ho gaya !!

now comments!!
the poem is better than than most of the poems of LOTR. it is sooo good. not a single thing left behind. evey issue discussed!!

the quatity of representing things has improved from the first one to the third one.

LOTR and ERAGON mein to koi ugly race nahi tha..may be warcrafts wale book mein ho.

but AWESOME bhaiya..waiting eagerly for the next two.jaldi likho and humara dil khush kar do.

November 14, 2007 at 10:27 AM  
Blogger The Junkie said...

Clarification:

The first part was from a human point of view. My fault for not making it that obvious.
I believe the Elven race will be humiliated if I use a meagre "good" to describe them :). The elven race shall also make an appearance (later).

Return comment:

You think that this poem was better than most of the poems of LOTR? Wow! You have really made my day. The LOTR poems have been a tremendous source of inspiration for me, especially the Elven themes. I cannot even imagine my poem being compared to something of that stature in the first place.

About the ugly race, well yes Warcraft 3 introduces a legion of spirits, cursed underworld dwellers and damned humans (post death) uniting to form an army. If you look at LOTR and Eragon carefully, you will find a hint of their existence. See in Eragon, Durza is embodied by such damned spirits. Obviously they are not in such a great force. Even in LOTR, for the final battle Aragon summons the pirate-like spirits and promises them freedom in return of a favour. It's just that here they are more important than in the two epics, because they are in direct contact with the "outsiders" and they directly control the Orcs.

I hope to write the remaining parts soon. Maybe after the 25th. I have a favour to return to the supporting friends like you.

November 14, 2007 at 2:56 PM  
Blogger devshree said...

well after reading it three times i finally got it n just got two words for this -- hats off..

November 2, 2008 at 3:59 PM  

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